This poem was really good. I can tell that it really came from your heart. I'm sorry for your lose, no one deserves to loose a child. I send my prayers to your son. I really hope God will send you a miricale.

Such a sad poem but yet full of a mothers love!!!

This is a really powerful poem. in every word you feel a ton of different emotions come out such as sadness, loss, love. i enjoyed reading it but it did make me cry but not in a bad way. :)

its really beautiful.

5/5

Again you have done another good job and the emotion is really good in this poem. The flow and rhyme was good as well. This was a really good poem dealing with why someone died and you did a great job.

Awww Barb, that is amazing.. Keep smiling. You are a wonderful Mother.