Comments : Ride Upon The Moon~Retourne

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Oh wow, MaryAnne..this poem had such great wording..Reading it, I almost felt like a child again, staring at the moon:)

    Where anything is possible,
    Even the most outrageous thoughts,
    Like sliding down the crescent moon,
    A slippery surface so vast

    ^^

    I really, really liked the images these words put in my head.

    Great work, you did so well:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid