The Musette consists of three verses of three lines each. The first lines have two syllables; the second lines have four syllables, and the third lines have two syllables. The rhyme scheme is a/b/a for the first verse; c/d/c for the second verse, and e/f/e for the third verse. The title should reflect the poem's content.
I like how you personified the sun and brought the image to life:)
Stopping,
Its work over,
Dropping.
^^
I must say I am glad he takes a pause, because in some parts of the world, he doesn't ( e.g. Scandinavia) and I would find it very hard to sleep when it's light both day and night, don't you?