Stairs

by MyMuse   Jun 1, 2009


Stairs
Climbing down
Ever so slow,each step
Careful for nails, weak spots too
Descending the stairs gracefully today
Strength is a must to have, going over trouble
Down the stairs you slowly climb, not knowing next
Each step different,unique in its own way,
...Watching for the end.....
One more step to go,
Before reaching the end of this journey
Stairs like life, the end like death,as you slowly next
Each Day

Stairs
We all have somethings to climb...don't ever give up on your "stairs".

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I like it. It sounds just like Langston Hughe's poem Mother to Son. You should check it out...

    http://www.crystalstairs.org/about_us/our_name.htm

    I like it. Five out of five.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A really great message, what a comparison you have made, you amazed me with this one! How inspirational this piece was as well as the good wording used. Just one thing:

    "Stairs like life, the end like death,as you slowly next"

    "as you slowly next" - shouldn't that say "as you are slowly next"? It is not worded correctly.

    Also, try putting a space between the comma and the word after, like I am doing, it reads better and looks better.

    4/5 from me, you repeated "slowly" a few times which kinda threw me off but otherwise good job!

    God Bless You, pm me if you want....

    ~MaryAnne

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