I really tried to vote this one twice, coz its worth it... :)
Beautifully written and i simply loved it right from the start.

all the best and take care

Sourav
What a breathtaking piece you have penned.

I'm the carrier of your love
Bearer of our dreams
Singer of that song
Written on your theme.

What a hard jog to be the one carring all that love. Yet when your heart has opened to a true love nothing is ever to much.

I'm surprised by the joy
Deluged by opulence love brings
As this journey goes on
I start to believe I'm the king.

In the eyes of your beloved you are her King

Let's hold our feelings to stay
Arouse the flame of desire
We will craft the art of love
Against all odds, until we retire.

True love is meant to last through time. Being together for ever through all eterninty.

So seal the fate in love's meeting
Paint yourself in crimson of passion
Bed of roses, a thousand kisses
May love roll in infinite fashion.

I love the ending. I have all my hopes that my true love is waiting for me on the otherside. Great imagery. This picture of love you painted is awesome.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Sourav, a wonderful love poem. Love and passion go hand in hand and if one of them is missing, things do not go well. Well done.

Oh wow...I loved this:)

Such a passionate plea for love, really beautiful Sourav!
So seal the fate in love's meeting
Paint yourself in crimson of passion
Bed of roses, a thousand kisses
May love roll in infinite fashion.

^^

My favorite stanza:)

Excellent poetry.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow.

<3

Hello,

The language that you have used throughout this poem breathes a special affection that surrounds the overall emotional intent.

Well done

Michael

Wow. These words are strong and hit the heart. Great work.

Very few people in this site write good love poems...Although you'll see them coming everyday, most of them were having hallow emotions and less interesting...This piece was one of those priceless love poem, meticulously written, The words were like special spare parts handled and refined so smoothly..God job on this one..

A wonderful poem about love.. I loved it!
Splendid :]