Will i ever be the same..

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   Jun 1, 2009


I've written this a thousand times
I never get it right,
I want to explain just how I've felt
Since that horrible night,
You'll probably never read this
I guess you just don't care,
But here on this page is my heart
So lost and full of despair.

My best friend, my soul mate
The shoulder that i could cry on
You i thought i could never hate,
You taught me that I'm loved
That I'd never be alone
Adventures we did go on
Exploring things unknown;
People thought we were mad
But with you i didn't care,
I never will forget the fun we had
The memories that we shared;
When i told you i loved you
That you were a sister at heart,
Every word i spoke was true;
The way we parted it was unfair
How could you let a guy break us,
i gave you my everything i swear
I gave you my happiness..

So maybe i didn't explain it right
Maybe it just cant be put into words,
But without you life...well it isn't so bright
And everyday i do hurt;
I have other friends, people to talk to
I laugh and smile with them
But no one can compare to you;
You hurt me worse then anyone could
And I'm not sure I'll recover
My trust is gone for good...

Photos and memories are everywhere
They just wont seem to fade
And now I'm starting to think,
will i ever be the same...

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  • 14 years ago

    by morgan

    I love the feeling behind the words. they scream sadness and reality. it is very well written. truly a great poem. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I love friendship poems.. and this one is so touching, LOL. Very well written, and expressed.

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    I always love poems that are written from the heart. Genuine feelings always will touch the readers heart. The flow was actually perfect except for you giving up your happiness, i think that line was a little awkward there..That was just an opinion and i totally respect how you want it this way..I hope by writing this, would ease the longingness and pain you are having inside. It was beautifully written contradicting to what you have stated in your post..Good Job..

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This was a sad poem, a scene beautifully and wonderfully depicted. Though, the beginning began wonderfully, the flow and rhyme seemed to cease and disappear as it neared the middle.

    I loved the way that you didn't confine yourself to the common 4 line stanzas. 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This wasn't a bad poem hun. When the feelings you express come from the heart, nothing can go wrong. I love way you write it's very deatiled and emotoional. I don't read many friendship poems, but I'm glad I read this one. Nice work. Nik

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