Awsome poem, it shows how truly sad you are feeling, the amount of emotion in the poem is also amazing, honesty goes a long way and it certainly did for you in this poem 5/5 congratz

This wasn't a bad poem hun. When the feelings you express come from the heart, nothing can go wrong. I love way you write it's very deatiled and emotoional. I don't read many friendship poems, but I'm glad I read this one. Nice work. Nik

This was a sad poem, a scene beautifully and wonderfully depicted. Though, the beginning began wonderfully, the flow and rhyme seemed to cease and disappear as it neared the middle.

I loved the way that you didn't confine yourself to the common 4 line stanzas. 4/5

I always love poems that are written from the heart. Genuine feelings always will touch the readers heart. The flow was actually perfect except for you giving up your happiness, i think that line was a little awkward there..That was just an opinion and i totally respect how you want it this way..I hope by writing this, would ease the longingness and pain you are having inside. It was beautifully written contradicting to what you have stated in your post..Good Job..

I love friendship poems.. and this one is so touching, LOL. Very well written, and expressed.

I love the feeling behind the words. they scream sadness and reality. it is very well written. truly a great poem. :)