Comments : Captive Butterfly

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    A wonderfully emotional poem that shows how self loathing can turn to a sad disease and leads as we see everyday to sadness and the harrowing pictures of thinness it causes and of the deaths of wonderful people and the hopelessness of those that love them. Excellently written and harrowing Ray S 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    A wonderfully emotional poem that shows how self loathing can turn to a sad disease and leads as we see everyday to sadness and the harrowing pictures of thinness it causes and of the deaths of wonderful people and the hopelessness of those that love them. Excellently written and harrowing Ray S 5/5