by just a poet Jun 1, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I strong, |
by Jad
Good job with this poem. Though this was a simple poem it brought forth a good message that was beautifully written poem. The flow was pretty food as well as the rhyming. The way you talk about surviving in the rain and in the sun was a good idea and you did a great job with it. Good Job. |