I liked it before I read your explanation of a Retourne, and then I understood the outline. Beautifully written with wonderful words. 5/5

Aw:/ You don't need to be perfect MaryAnne!

Just be you and you will be fine:)

About the poem: it was cleverly construed and I really enjoyed reading it.

Good job/ story!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid