by HisBlueEyedAngel Jun 2, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I can't wait till your back in |
Okay, this was a good poem and I did feel the emotions and how much you missed him. I enjoyed this short piece but I did think more imagery and descriptions could be added. It was a bit plain to me and I didn't feel your words as much as I would have liked to. 4/5 from me, take care and God bless you, Child of God! |