Hope you won, lol

With this id expect you to come in first, second & third haha.

Well done Aish, with anutha great masterpeice.

*Hunny*

Well well well. Youve done it again. lol I like it, again, you manage to do a great job at expressing yourself. Short and simple, and yet, so powerful. I loved the ending stanza, wrapped it up well, but something about it didnt seem like it flowed well. Just the way im reading it, i duno, the last line just didnt flow perfect to me. I duno. But anyways, this is very worthy of another 5. Great work Aish. xx