Raindrops On Her Window

The night is dark and gloomy
on the table burns a taper
sitting alone in her room
thoughts flow from pen to paper

*I like how you started this poem. It's very simple but beautiful at the same time. Nice work*

craving for his kisses
upon her lonely lips
the feel of sensual caresses
flowing from his fingertips

*Wow...I think this is my favorite stanza. I love the style of this poem, also one of my favorites :)*

thunder crashes outside
lightening illuminates the sky
loves electrical currents
within the room they fly

*I love how you add in the weather here, very clever. You express the emotions very clearly as well*

the need for him grows deeper
as the storm continues to blow
but distance dampens pleasure
and tears fall like the raindrops on her window

*This was such a sad poem, but perfect as well. I didn't see any flaws here. Very nice work. Nik*

SAD :-( , great write but sad!

This was a very romantic, yet a bit sad poem, I loved the middle two stanza`s the best. You have definitely painted a very lovely portrait here, Kudos to you. Timothy r