by Lindsay Jun 2, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I was too young I think, |
by The Queen
That was beautiful...I liked how you describe yourself as a bird, and as how young and innocent you are..But as i read further I realized that it was a sad one especially when you mentioned the relationship between you and your mother...I'll give you another 4 for that as i think, there are some minor lines to be fixed however it is just my opinion and not to be taken in a wrong way.. |