The identity of expression
is the prowess of artistic creation
lost in production of poetry.

*This is very true and the flow went really good in this part and so did your rhyming. *

Executed filler words,
cliched ponderings written -
occuping pieces of art.

*Once again another great work showing what we write and what is meant by them.*

The creator of poetry
is the preside of attention
lost in transit of words.

And to sum it all up you did a great job and the picture you painted with this poem is really good. All in all you did a really good job with this poem.

Joe,

This is a superb write, as always. For once, a poem about poetry haha. Pretty much flawless, but I think 'occuping' should be 'occupying'.

Excepting this tiny, tiny error then this is a wonderful piece, your first in a while (by the looks of it) that isn't written for a contest, which is always good :D

5/5 from me! :)

Keep writing,
Emily :)

Well done Joe! I swear you were trying to make this a tongue twister.. soo many 'p words' haha, no but on a more serious note, I really thought your poem here spoke a lot of truth.. I kept nodding with everything you said.

Great work.

5/5.

Temps

I like your word choice and the meaning of this piece. Nice job!

First time I beheld your poetry and I must say i'm very impressed. Your word choice was very intriguing and the poem overall is very true.

keep up the good work,

5/5

Joe,
My goodness it seems as though you have budded into an awesome poet overnight with the stuff you have written as of late. I have to be quite honest here but to look back on some of your earlier writings as compared to what you have been writing lately its as though the growth has hit a spurt and is not likely to stop. I am enjoying reading you more and more and looking forward to what you have to say in your poetry. I applaud you on a job well done. Now, as for the poem itself we only develop from what we have written and though cliches are written today if we listen and learn from what we are taught then we develop moreover as a poet and not just a line writer wishing to be a poet.
Again I applaud you on a beautiful write speaking depths about the verse and the person behind the pen.
5/5 and my vote!

Take Care,
Kay

I like the idea of this. Writing about the poet him or herself. Even if some of the poems are cliche or not amazing, the fact is it's poetry. The small victories or the famous writes.

Well chosen words and type of poetry.

Five out of five.

Very nice bold free verse with a great point

Not that much to say about this piece other than your execution and idea complemented each other very well.

'Executed filler words,'

Don't like 'executed' but that's the only thing that I don't like. Message was clear, and your word choice was mostly well fitted.

Well done.

Pellucidity I think not too many cliches cloud a brilliant idea. My father used to say bullsh-t baffles brains and although this is a good piece of writing I think it is over clever as a poem or verse. It may have read great to our psuedo-intellects but I love simplicity so that all can read it. Thus I am not even going to give this a mark. Ray S Disappionted is the word

Well done Joe.

5/5

I like it but it was just too short

I really enjoyed this write. I love poems about poetry... because you're expressing how poetry helps you express your feelings and how it creates meaning. Great job :)

This poem is very true an very well written.

"Executed filler words,
cliched ponderings written -
occupy pieces of art."

A perfectly written stanza with amazing diction, i.e. "Executed", "cliched ponderings" "occupy".

Art is a form of expression and without expression it can not be art; poetry is an art, and without expression it can not be poetry.

Great job!
5/5

I like this poem very much as well. :D It's simple and short but it portrays so much meaning.

Wow that was good...really good..the flow beautiful.

Hey Joe. Long time no read. It's been at least 4 Years.

I love this poem and I can see why it won the contest.

I always loved your work.

-Josh

Looks like I missed this one when it won. Unique write, gives the reader some introspect in regards to his or her own writing. Cliches are a catch 22; in the history of the world, surely everything has been said more than once ;)
A short poem that can get the reader to think is always a good poem in my book.