Drunken ornament of the world

I really like this poem

I think everyone in some way or another has experienced this type of person, just trying to find things to say, really sad poem but I loved it just the same. Timothy r

I liked this poem, you de-attached yourself from the poem and looked at a person as an inanimate object. I can also relate to this having to live with my alcholic uncle.

This poem is really well done, I enjoyed it, I felt that rthyme was a bit forced at times but enjoyed it just the same.

This is a poem that you can really look at and say "hmmm very nice job" and not have to sit down for hours and think about what it is the person is writing about.

Very well done.

thank you as well for your comment.