Comments : Bouquet

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    You tore me up
    You through me out
    These flowers rot
    I through them out
    They turned and changed
    They shaded brown
    Like a word or a phrase
    They turned around
    They turned and died
    They shaded black
    Like envisioned lives
    We'll never get back

    *This part was really sad. I was hoping for a happy ending. You tricked me lol. I love th imagery though. You use very lovely words. Nik*

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    I think it would be very nice for a song..I liked the simplicity in it. and as stated by the person above me, you have used lovely words..

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I can relate to these lyrics...great imagery and metaphors