Whoa...this poem is beyond what my 17 year old mind can understand. This was so deep...I had to read it several times and I'm still trying to figure what's going on. I don't like to be confused, this poem confused me in a good way though. It makes me think...whicj is good :) I love the imagery. Your words are so beautiful. This poem shows us all what real heartfelt poetry is about. Wonderful job. Nik

Miren,

This is absolutely beautiful! I loved the wording, the images and off course the format also:)

Nocturnal craving,
unclothing fidelity
-of a matrimonial night...
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^^^
Most beautiful stanza, nocturial craving...something most adults know about, he he.

A gem:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

What a beautifully crafted poem. Great vocab, really allows me as a reader to visualize your masterpiece

Excellent Job

I'n not one for deconstructing poems on paper or such but I do in my head.. I love the descriptive words used in this piece but all i'm really seeing is a very nice way to say "slut" haha...
either way it's obviously well written and gives me a different scene for each stanza

:)