The Sad Cafe

by Nee   Jun 3, 2009


A mug lies before you
filled with coffee
flavored with pain,
Steam of rejection
all set on a table of fire.

hands that burn
attempting to write empty thoughts,
on a paper of doleful lines
and a pen that cries
-silently-

You gradually relish your pain
reveling-
an addict,
as if any antidote
would never heal you

Gazing at her vacant spot
(I once killed love
left it to rot,
yet I enjoyed the torment)

Until aurora approaches
you sit here
Like it's your reign.
You die..
while breaths tell you're alive-
They lie!

Strength has come to its peak
Frailty cauterizes the heart
You wither slowly after the dawn
A lonesome in the cafe
-Portrayed on the wall-
left to fade to gray..

Written May 18th.09
For a club challenge :) I guess you'll find lots of things to criticize..

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  • 14 years ago

    by Yuuki

    Wow great poem, its perfectly written ur emotions are very clear great job

  • 15 years ago

    by dora

    Great work again as always. u know how to captivate the reader from start to end! 5/5 of course!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    OMG Nema... I can see why you won. This poem is absolutely brilliant. I like how you express coffee flavored with liquid pain and how a pen cries... I mean those 2 expression totally blown me away. I'm proud to see you progress to be an excellent writer day by day;)

    A truly well deserve win;)

  • 15 years ago

    by ether

    Nice work Nema! My only complaint would be the title. Sad, sad.
    I'm glad you won this week, you deserve it.

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Beautiful!

    This is my favorite from you so far!

    amazing job!

    criticize? only compliments here!

    5/5