Wow what a challenge this poem must of been for you...rubberized hearts, interesting.. Ive never heard of something like that before. Unique write, definatly a winner. Your word choice shined with every word. :]

5/5.

Temps.

A great choice in the form though its hard to do you seemed to do a good job with it. The flow went smoothly and so did the rhyming. The emotion was pretty descent. The idea of a rubberized heart was clever and you did a great job with it.