Very touching. The emotions were amazing. I liked how you formed the stanzas. I think it was very creative and it helps the flow, which was very steady throughout the poem. Some things though.

"The poems that I wrote will cut you like a knife."

-Very effective, but it's a little ordinary. Try making your own metaphors, it gives the reader a sense of who you are and a much better understanding of how you're feeling in the poem.

Besides that, I thought the poem was brilliant. Great job, keep on writing. 5/5!

-mandy :)