by Danielle Jun 4, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
Confront distortion, |
by Cindy
Congrats on your win :) |
A brilliant write, that really made me think. I enjoyed this piece, you have much talent, making the reader ponder what you have written about, such a thought-provoking poem. Congrats on the win, you deserved it! God Bless You! |
by Rachel RTVW
This is a thought provoking piece. I like the word choice although I was wondering why you chose to say sighing lightly instead of softly. |