Comments : Unfrozen; Frozen (Triolet)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    Good job joe with this poem. Indeed what you say is true and your style you did the poem in was quite nice. The flow was consistent and so was the structure. In all this was another great poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I liked your chioce of wording here =] A very small beautiful poem, againi liked the style and structure!