by Italian Stallion Jun 4, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Unique |
by Nobodys Hero
Very thoughtful, this was a clever way of explaining the structure =] I think you portray the theme very well |
by Jad
This was a nice way for a poem to explain itself. You did a good job with this poem and it went real well. I think your doing really great and hope you keep it up. So overall the flow was good and everything also. Good job. |