The Unforgiven (Tyburn)

I love how the last two lines flowed so nicely together.

The words you used fit the title perfectly.

Five.

Well written Tyburn with much depth to ponder

I love the Tyburn :)
No matter how hard I tried and failed to write it..lol. I guess you just did it for me :)

"Burnt fumes of Coldness; Heartless with rage,"
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Amazing line...very heartfelt.

Well done Joe :]
Write on~

It stick to the form, I'm going to put aside the fact that I have mutli's poly salavic or whatever you want to call it.

I think that this is a poem that can be looked deep into, a picture is worth a thousand words, you painted a picture with your pen, this is well done.

I felt that you really showed your vocab. It's something that I rarely see done(i'm guilty of it as well).

I enjoyed the poem and felt it deserved a five. I always like to read your poems as you challenge yourself and your vernacular is so wonderful.

Wow this was simply amazing though it doesn't look like much to a common reader. The poem was good and the flow and meter and everything else to. This was another great poem and I don't think that any think can be changed about this poem because you already did a great job with it.