This was a wonderful poem with great emotion in it and it is one of the best I've read. This poem first off was great in the aspect of the flow because you kept it consistent through the entire thing and that brings me to the structure which was good and was done seemingly perfect. Then the imagery in this poem was also really good. you could almost see someone molding in front of your eyes as you read it and could feel what the sculptor felt. This was really a great poem that gave good description about what was being done and it ended up as a great work of greatness. Then to say it all was the ending which surprised me that the person was just doing nothing and yet you wanted him to do whatever and yet he did nothing. Great ending, Good job with this poem and continue the great work. -Jad

Rip away my old life.
Shred it; hide it; throw it away.
Cure me of the 'used-to-be.'
Bring me into the now.

*I loved this stanza. I could feel you beggint his person to help yu and I can relate to that. This poem had so many emotions and they were all clearly expressed. I wasn't confused when I finshed reading this. You have such a way with words. Very nice work. I love the title as well :) Keep it up. Nik*