Queen Of Spring~Concrete Poetry
by Poet on the Piano Jun 4, 2009
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15 years ago
by Spirit
Is the picture a woman? If not it's what I saw. It was not what I am used to when I think concrete poem, but that being said I do like your version of this type of poem just as much. I was able flowed freely from one verse to anothe. Without interuption due to the verses size changing.
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15 years ago
by Lady Nik
Awww this was so cute ^.^ I think you did a wonderful job! I would have went crazy trying to do this. Amazing job MaryAnne. I loved it. Nik
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15 years ago
by Obscura
Wow brilliant poem the structure was really amazing on this one i liked the style of it it is really special the words flowed so well within it
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15 years ago
by Nobodys Hero
Well iv'e never seen anything like this before, I found it a really interesting idea. As for the poem it's self I found your chioce of wording really descriptive and very fitting to the style of the piece =] Another really good job!
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15 years ago
by Corruption
This is a great poem
very unique
and i like the idea of the format
it is appealing to the eyes
if i may offer one suggestion
i would take the word -up- out of the following line of your poem
"As a fully grown up flower"
id make is just
"As a fully grown flower"
i find it flows better
but great job on the poem
i hope to read more:)
Keenan
