Aw! You did great MaryAnne:)

I did one too about a tree once!

Yours is much more beautiful, it must have taken you hours to get it that perfect:)

Lovely, just lovely sweetheart!

If I were you, I would mention the word Concrete poetry in the title. People will be very curious to see what you've made, because of the difficult format.

You aced this, girl:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This is a great poem
very unique
and i like the idea of the format
it is appealing to the eyes

if i may offer one suggestion
i would take the word -up- out of the following line of your poem
"As a fully grown up flower"
id make is just
"As a fully grown flower"
i find it flows better

but great job on the poem
i hope to read more:)

Keenan

Well iv'e never seen anything like this before, I found it a really interesting idea. As for the poem it's self I found your chioce of wording really descriptive and very fitting to the style of the piece =] Another really good job!

Wow brilliant poem the structure was really amazing on this one i liked the style of it it is really special the words flowed so well within it

well done

Awww this was so cute ^.^ I think you did a wonderful job! I would have went crazy trying to do this. Amazing job MaryAnne. I loved it. Nik

Is the picture a woman? If not it's what I saw. It was not what I am used to when I think concrete poem, but that being said I do like your version of this type of poem just as much. I was able flowed freely from one verse to anothe. Without interuption due to the verses size changing.

Well don and I hope to read more.