This was a nice poem. the flow got off a little in a couple of places, but overall, it was a good poem. lovely.

Wow. This is amazing! I know what it feels like and I'm sorry you felt this way. There is a message, a story, even a cry out to the reader, if I may call it any of those, and it is extremely clear. The use of emotion and vocabulary go hand in hand to create a simple yet extraordinary piece.