Frozen Soul

by Good Enough   Jun 5, 2009


My heart is aching with bloody tears
That drops so heavily within me
The burden of hate stitches slow
And fills me with so much pain
A bleeding heart, a frozen soul

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  • 15 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    A short poem but its sad and deep to.... i like poem...... 5/5 for this poem....

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...I loved this. It's short and straight to the point. I felt like you covered all of the pain you were feeling without going to far. I love the imagery and the loose syntax you use as well. Keep it up babe. Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Whoa. intense. it's short and to the point. you really got your message across. and as dark and sad as it is i totally love it. very beautiful in a depressed way. 5/5.

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