My December~Monchielle

by Poet on the Piano   Jun 5, 2009


My pleasant December,
Oh, how I greatly miss,
The dreams you brought alive,
Creating harmony,
That shall forever thrive.

My pleasant December,
If only you realized,
The merriment expressed,
To all playful children,
You would live without rest.

My pleasant December,
How I cherish your month,
Though I must wait so long,
It is worth all my time,
In your love I belong.

My pleasant December,
Never shall one day pass,
Where I won't crave your touch,
For my hope has nourished,
Because you care so much.

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The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in
each verse. Each line within the stanzas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme.
The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I must say I really loved the unique perspective of this write, you really did well with that. What a difficult form as well - the Monchielle, you did a flawless job though. The Monchielle is such a difficult form to pull off but you did a beautiful job.

    5/5.

    Temps

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yes, MaryAnne, you are that girl who always makes so many poems about Christmas, aren't you?? Ha ha, I love it too, the presents and the beautiful tree and Jack the snowman:)

    You did well on this format. I think it's pretty special that you ace all of the formats you have tried so far. You go girl:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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