Arise from this curse,
oh princess of the valley
Slumber no longer
suffocates your weary life.
You are free, now seek revenge.

I think this would gain without some of the interpunction. I write mine without caps/ stops at all, but the way I did it here ^^ is already less than you had and I think it looks better on the page.

I love the poem, btw..so creative, MaryAnne:)
I hope she will not come after me, lol.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

That was very beautiful. I love your choice of words and the idea of the poem. 5/5!

-mandy :)