There`s A Tear In My Eye..

by Dreamofolwin   Jun 5, 2009


There`s a tear in my eye..
And a sigh in my heart.
Coz I know that you never,
Can be a part..

Of my life in the way..
That I want you to be.
Never thought that this,
Would happen to me.

You see love never happens..
The way that we plan.
The love that can happen,
Between a woman and man.

It takes us surprisingly..
When we re least unawares.
Not expecting to have,
Someone for us who cares.

Ive fallen so deeply..
I dont know what to do.
But my heart will always treasure,
The memories of you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    I love this poem, you wrote it with such emotion, obviously, it was heartfelt. i can feel your pain, i can relate too, and so naturally, it bought a tear to my eye...beautiful write. i read it for pleasure, so i found no flaws. keep writing!
    Mez x

  • 15 years ago

    by moonlil

    Great poem! I can relate to that.

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Beautiful job!

    5/5

    HvN

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well Olwin your poem was sweet with a rather melancholy feel about it, over all it was well presented the rhyming was not too bad your syllable count was slightly off in one or two places but again it did not spoil the poem at all.
    Well done

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This one is so very simply written. Just a raw poem with so much emotions in it. A poem which hasnt been twisted and turned to please anyone, just simple and deep. Beautiful poem.

    all the best and take care

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