by xXxemzxXx Jun 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Shadows all around |
I like the short sentances, it made it easy to read. It flowed together really well, and the emotion in this was awesome... great job! |
by Angel Tears
This poem has a unique style and is also filled with emotion. The way everything was portrayed was excellent. Very nice write. |
Very bland and unoriginal. Emotion is stale. Flow is all over the place, as well as punctuation. |
by Princess09
Great poem. full of emotions n i like the diff structure!!! |
by Lady Nik
I like the style. The use of short sentences makes me feel like you are shouting. Very effective. I love how pure the emotions are. Nothing seems forced. Very nice work. Nik |