by Armada the Gestalt Jun 5, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Don't forget to sing though the sun won't rise, |
This is very deep! And interesting. I love the repitition of the first line, and the second lines that follow that with a different rhyme. It was my favorite part. :-) Beautiful! |
by Wishmaster
Wow. This like a song. I could hear the notes being played as I read. Loved the diction of the piece! VERY WELL WRITTEN, my fav parts were the "stand and fight!" parts. Again, I loved it! |