by that Dude Jun 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My brother, my brother, what have you done? |
Wow......... |
The ending really gave me chills, a quick read but the sadness starts pretty low and really builds up towards the end. You did a good job with this.. the reader feels the authors pain. |
by Good Enough
Wow... Tht was really realaly good. I can really feel ur pain. U can also feel disapointment with "what have you done" but then u feel the saddness and hurt of wen he left. :( srrry for ur loss 5/5 |