I love this part the best.

Your broke my heart in pieces
And probably hers as well
Cause you cheated on both of us
Your lying words they tell
vary good..

Do you love both of us?
Or is this your fantasy game?
Cause I would rather loose
Then keep our love aflame

i like this part the best but sadly it carries a mistake hey another rhyme lolz. anyway that is most guys fantasies two girls lolz. but he left you an 80 for a 20 its a real dum mistake on his part. love the poem keep writing