Never again to commit suicide you should be geared, for your friends are always there to help you conquer your fears. Thats a personal statement that i repeat over and over again. Know what, the path to a better tomorow is your dedication towards achieving a better today. It might be hard when alone but there is strength in numbers. The rhymes made you poem flow and really interesting to read. I like the structure of your sentences and your good use of punctuations. Good work.