by Michael D Nalley Jun 6, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I would rather be deaf and dumb |
by The Queen
I have to agree with Mouris (It happened one night) of him about the quality of greatness..Most of the poems i've read from you were portraying of whats going on in the world today. Lots of words of wisdom burried within each words in the poem. A very possitive message was conveyed just too sad few people only know... |
by kelleyana
I like thethe pun use throughout this poem. I enjoy your unique writing styles, it is really one of a kind. Well done, 5/5, kel. |
This poem had incredible flow, a nice theme rhymes and was wonderfully crafted. Though I found that the very first stanza seemed confusing, it gradually became clearer and it's idea more flowing. 5/5 Well Done. |
by JAZMIN
This was very good!! |
Our hell and heaven* |