What a sad but true poem. You seem to question a lot in your poem which isn't bad but I was just stating. Your emotion in the poem was really good and I really enjoyed how you questioned one thing to the next. The flow of the poem was good but it seemed like in some places you forced the rhyme. The rhyming though was good. But all in all you did a good job.

Woah, and i mean WOAH! This is like...exactly how i feel. Its hard losing friends, and not having them there for you, especially if youre there for them. Youve done an excellent job though, very sad, but so true. Well done. 5/5