Your Poem iiS Beautiful
iiT Hit Mii Deep
Closely To Bring Tears To Mh Eyes
ii Use To Feel The Same Way
But Yu Was more Brave Nd Went Away
iiNstead Of Leaving ii Pretended Nd Still Stayed
Even When ii Wanted To Leave Mh Feet Wouldnt Move, His Love Had A Strong Embrace On Mii

This is sooo beautiful. Sooo emotional. I loved it. The ending was sooo bitter-sweet. keep it up.

victoria

What a sad... Yet pretty poem!

I enjoyed it, well done :)