This poem's flow was so perfect it almost seemed to be Dr. Seuss on some sort of worped level.

I loved your use of different parts of the english language to explain your words in this poem.

"But words can curse internally.
With one single tone of my voice
Ill send your soul to the infirmary."
^ I loved these lines, especially the very last line which almost seemed to be said mockingly. In a way that's in your face and yet you just //know// you mean it.

At first, your poem title confused me, but after reading it, it was actually a pretty well chosen title, though anyone merely seeing it would be curious to see as to what it means. 5/5 Exceptionally well written.

A very interesting write =] I think it's a very good poem. Your flow was perfect and the structure works quite well. The way you worded the poem was different too, I really enjoyed reading it nice work 5/5