by Good Enough
This is my favorite by u! This is so good. ican closoe y eyes and visualize every single last word u wrote. It flfows so nicely even when u read it out loud. Wow. This is really good. 5/5 |
by Lady Nik
I look upon the fading sun the day has died the night has begun. As the stars become visible and the moon shines bright illuminating nature with its glowing silky light. |
by Nobodys Hero
I think the first verse is a beautiful way to open the poem the chioce of wording is very good. |
by Kimberley
Wow. Like major wow. This is sooo amazing. I love it all and i can't pick a favourite stanza. 5/5. keep it up. :) |
"I look upon the fading sun |
This poem is amazing. I absolutely loved it! Thw hole thing definitely kept me reading. 100/5! |
Already the title tells the reader that its gonna be a desriptive poem, and it it!! Its awesome. I like the flow, and the ending tied it all together... great write! |
This is a very beautiful poem reflecting poetically natural wonders |
I love this . . . the imagery is amazing. |
This poem is fantastic. |
by Love Panda
Absolutly loved it, from start to finish. My fave lines in the whole poem... |
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by victoria
But the night is betrayed |
by Em
I love the imagery this portrays of the moon and it's living creatures that we never notice because we are all sound asleep. Such a wonderful portrayl of night. Good job, 5/5. Em |
by Martha
I liked it very much...it is so beautiful, it became my favorite.. I like every stanza because I could imagine and visualize the words you put in it.. :D good job :D |