Wow...you never fail to write a great poem . .good flow of emotions. . . its true..when you are hurt...your frnds are the ones you can lean onto...everythings gonna be okay...^^,

peace~

This was a very good poem and you did a wonderful job with it and with dannys challenge. The flow of the poem was good and so was the rhyme. The emotion you put in this poem was really good and it can be felt by the reader. The overall poem though was absolutlely good and I loved it. Good job

Very well written poem.. it shall be one of my favorites out of all the poems you have here.. 5/5..

Wow this is amazing its so desciptive and so full of emotion the only thing i could see wrong was stop was spelt wrong on the first line but apart from that its brilliant

well done

This poem is pact with emtion and you have written it beautifully =] You carried the flow perfectly and your chioce of wording suited the piece very well! A very lovely poem with a great rhyming scheme 5/5

I started to read and was about to stop because of the self mutilation part of the poem, I realized it was another thing.

I think that this poem is good. It's one of the few poems I can relate to and understand. It's a really nice write.

I enjoyed the poem as a whole, but I felt like all your other poems, it didn't have that one phrase that caught my eye. I did like the poem though, really good read.

Thanks for the write.

Wow. This was magnificent. It held a constant rhythm and the flow was catchy. I felt like i was living your life. You captured the essence
of this poems meaning so brilliantly. Everyone needs a friend. A best friend that will help us conquer our fears and up us create some individuality for ourselves.Sometimes friends teach us to gain independence as well. This piece was ardent and spoke in delicate tones. You leveled out the intensity. Not many poets can enable their works to hold just the right amount of each emotion. But you wrote and succeeded in sculpting a mighty fine poem. Each stanza captivated me.

"Nik is now dancing with roses
While the music of the stranger plays.
Her heart has never felt so whole
She can only wish this feeling stays
For five years, the blade has ruled
But in the realm of roses the blade no longer remains With the stranger by her side
This dance will linger throughout the rest of her days."

- This stanza was the best and it was an admirable conclusion. I liked it the best.

Altogether you have penned a marvelous piece. I can relate to "the blade" and also the best friend. I respect you for this write. It's amazing!

Bravo!
*applauds*
5/5

-Lilium

Another very compassionate poem well written

This poem has a lot of compassion and a lot of meaning.

She looks down at her scarred wrists
And wonders when the blades will set her free.

i loved that part!
its easy for many people to understand what that feels like.

Good job. :D
-->Jess<--

This poem is brimming with emotion with a beautiful depiction of what is going on. A story, from start to finish acting as a narrator to a story. This was a wonderfully written piece.

This is a fantastic piece. I loved the story. It was like a dream that comes back to me about a past I've tried to leave behind. For a poem to draw this out of me, I must say, I'm impressed. Awsome writing.