Twelve Apostles~Senryu

by Poet on the Piano   Jun 9, 2009


Followers of Christ,
Traveling around the world,
To share the good news.

    report violation
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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    There is nothing wrong with the wording or the syllable count in this piece..but it needs a little more magic..some words that give it a little more power, idk..It's a good poem nonetheless:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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