This is a very well thought out poem that reflects emotion in a logical way

I really like this poem. It shows so much emotion! I loved the flow and everything about it, especially the ending. Great job, keep it up!

Another very cleverly thought out poem, that as Gravity is thought provoking but on a subject close to all of our hearts our partners or close friend,
Love the idea of you throwing in a poser(question) near the end and then the finale doing the same,' Then use it as a CLUE.'

I personally would steer clear of anybody who does not want to share it means they are selfish or simply cold? 5/5

So many relationships are like this I see them all the time, but people are to afraid to leave what they consider "love". If you're willing to give everything for your partner then they should be willing to sacrafice the same thats the way it works. Excellent job with this it spoke the truth 5/5

I often find in relationships im always the one doing and giving and never ask for anything in return, i know how you feel. its hard to put so much for someone and have them do nothing for you. it hurts. maybe i put myself in that position and all but still. this was intelligent and full of love, a combination i have never witnessed before this! amazing. it hit home. so great job. i know usually people comment with spelling errors and telling you how much you suck but im not like that and your poetry is awesome! unique and inspired!