by Cale Jun 9, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Today you became my girlfriend. |
by Dreamofolwin
Your writing is astounding lol. You make your poem feel so real, and I love the rhyme and flow in this piece. Keep up the fantastic work... |
by JessieGilroy
I was moved by this fantastic piece of art. It's my favorite poem, by far. I hope you don't mind that I've saved your writing on my computer, but I have written your name at the bottom along with the address bar. I'm amazed by the skill in this poem, and by the tears that almost fled my eyes. Thank you for submitting this, i think you have talent. Never give up. And if you make it big, please, PLEASE, message me and tell me, i'd love to be able to read more poems by you. |
by mzlovehate
My eyes watered as I read this. I felt love and understanding--I was basically moved. It takes skill to write such a loving piece that could depict life so perfectly. I am soo... speechless. |
by charles
Good writing, reminds me a bit of my own "Two Souls" |
by Kuro
Wow, that was deep and moving. love that lasts forever like that is rare and beautiful. |