Do I still write? you ask.
Write?
I don't write poetry anymore.
The days are muggy
The nights are short
My pens are out of ink
My pencils are broken
I can't find the will to rhyme
Because he doesn't love me.

*I love how you wrote this. It's almost a contradiction because you're writing a poem to show how you can't write a poem. It's funny and sad at the same time. I love how simple you examples are. Very nice way to start*

Do I still write? you ask.
Write?
I don't write songs anymore.
The days drag on
The nights are restless
My piano is missing keys
My throat is scratchy
I can't find the will to sing
Because he doesn't love me.

*I love how you go from poems to songs. This is such a sad poem. I know what it's like to not be able to do something becasue someone hurt you. You express that so well*

Do I still write? you ask.
Write?
I don't write stories anymore.
The days seem hopeless
The nights are lonely
My hand is tired
My paper is soggy from tears
I can't find the will to write
Because he doesn't love me.

*This was an amazing poem. I love the style and the use of rhetorical questions. Very nice work. Keep it up. Nik*

I really like this! Great work! Has lots of emotion and fits perfectly!!! You have amazing talent!!! 5/5

This is really good... i love the flow of it!! Great job!

Inspirational.

Wow, this was beautiful, I really felt it. Amazing writing. Keep it up!

This is really amazing, I feel like I can relate to this poem. Its so simple writing about how you cant write but you make it something so beautiful and emotional. Its really really good. 5/5