by Em Jun 9, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Hello my love, this is my last words to you |
by Andrew
This is a really emotional poem, you wrote it well Eventhough you lost the flow is some sentences. I like the expressions that you used in this poem, building us the emotion of a lost love that was not truly lost. Mmmh to die because of love? Thats a no no for me. Great poem though. |