This was a fantastic poem with an unusual style and you seem to have got it perfect again. The flow was good as well as the rhyme. You had the rhyming schyme good as well. The imagery in the poem was also good . I could just see a boy crying and holding the girls hand as he was in the boat. The emotion was good as well as example when the boy finally got to America you could tell how glad he was. This was an overall good write. 5/5

The first stanza is very beautiful.

That was very pretty. It was a good story. I know some people in countries that aren't that great and they truly want to go to america. Italy is a great country though.

Five out of five.